This reminds me of Great Matsuo Basho, originator of Haiku (Hokku)....good going !!! Please travel some in this field of poetry as you have THAT sense and I know you can give some more meanings to this STYLE of poetry...please carry ON..
Below is translation of your work in english...let me know if am missing THE Angle at any moment/line.. I'll be curious enough to consider the actual meaning and translate it further ::
Dear Eyes Have You Ever Seen Dark-No-Sound !!
O Dear Ear Have You Ever Heard Eternal-Silent-Words !!
O Lips Have You Ever Spoken Something of My Heart !!
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ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of Great Matsuo Basho, originator of Haiku (Hokku)....good going !!! Please travel some in this field of poetry as you have THAT sense and I know you can give some more meanings to this STYLE of poetry...please carry ON..
ReplyDeleteBelow is translation of your work in english...let me know if am missing THE Angle at any moment/line.. I'll be curious enough to consider the actual meaning and translate it further ::
Dear Eyes
Have You Ever Seen
Dark-No-Sound !!
O Dear Ear
Have You Ever Heard
Eternal-Silent-Words !!
O Lips
Have You Ever Spoken
Something of My Heart !!
O My Mind
Have You Ever Thought
Out of SELF !!
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